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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-05-30 06:40 AM


Still Loving
You

To the woman
that broke my heart
when she said
that we were
through.

Honey you can't
leave me now
because
I'm still
in love
with
you.

Sincerely,

JamesLee
May30
2002
YouWill
Always
KnowWho
YouAre


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-30 06:42 AM


There's been a lot of songs written with that theme in mind James! This is from the heart, brief and simple but still impacted with reality!
jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
2 posted 2002-05-30 06:50 AM


I do hope things have gone well for you. Your poem is so to the point!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-05-31 08:53 AM


James, this is revealingly good.  Unfortunately, the ones we love do those things we wish they would not.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

my3monkeytoes
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Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze
4 posted 2002-05-31 09:40 AM


Big hugs for your heart's owie.

~SM

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5 posted 2002-05-31 04:52 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is sooooo sadly touching, sweet friend, I can understand this and my heart goes out to you and I hope love offers another chance to your heart always to last forever! (sigh) This is sadly beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-05-31 05:16 PM


Thank you ethome, James, interloper, SM and Noah for responding...
Yes Noah loves does offer many chances...I believe sometimes we give up on love before love gives up on us...seems like love requires a strong and willing heart...James

Muys
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since 2002-04-06
Posts 389
The Netherlands
7 posted 2002-06-02 12:01 PM


I Am so sorry for you
Be strong
Hug  Myus

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2002-06-02 10:43 PM


James, you know I understand. But I think she will be back, if indeed she has gone. Don't give up!
Sandra

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-06-02 11:05 PM






I hope she comes back soon, James....

~sympathy hugs~

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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