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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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mCd's I wanted something not too hot and greasy was OK Wanting it now was the thought with onions and Mayonnaise a slab of meat, and none too fresh would nicely suffice as long as she put it in my grubby paws didn't care if cashiers were nice. in a plain brown wrapper, inside the bag came gut-busters de-jour eat it now, and pay much later complete with full bathroom tours. But wolf it down, Sir Munch-A-Lot no Royalty at Burger King But McD's is where I bought Now my butt is in a sling! For 4 more hours I sat and squirmed at work with pained expression while visions of Ex-Lax tossed and turned and kept me from depression. My jacket:a sponge in which to sop the smell of meals today Two weeks later, when wore again the aromas were still to stay. But go again, I know I shall an addiction: a disease For nothing satisfies sinful delight like an evening at McD's!! [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (06-01-2002 06:20 PM).] |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
HAHAHAHA, i really enjoyed this poem, it reflected McDonalds PERFECTLLY! You always go back thinking its going to be good eating but u end up sick on the toilet  The man of few words... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles hysterically) Oh my gosh, I love this, I can't stand McDonalds and most fast food at all, it sickens me just thinking about it, the only fast food I really dig is Good Times Burgers and Frozen Custard! (giggles) I should post my bad experience about Hardees on here, I think I'm going to do this, hehehehehe! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, away with that grease now! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
in a plain brown wrapper, inside the bag came gut-busters de-jour eat it now, and pay much later complete with full bathroom tours. ROFL....this is so true, Jeff. Now I know why I am an almost vegetarian.... This is a GREAT poem! ~ gut buster hugsLyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff Why is the memory so delious, if it was really so bad?? Poor baby! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling boy, how accurate is this, I love it. Without fail Mac-a-de’s makes everyone a little green around the gills. I’m laughing at this, and you know I still can’t give them up. I don’t eat them very often but every now and then I have a fillet of fish and wonder why I have dreadful stomach ache. Brilliant bit of writing, on a much lighter note than normal, and still incisive and lively, and witty, YOU really are a fantastic writer. And I love this utterly utterly.  :loveya Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
HeHe What a visual that was! Great job at depicting the great american gas up! ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HAHA, those are classic American greaseburgers, the reason the AHA physicians is getting rich. I think they actually own the franchise. "When will we ever learn, when will we ever learn?" Greaseburgers stomach revenge.... LOL, that's one reason I became a vegetarian. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
lol ohhh this is sooo true! I barely ever go to mcdonalds anymore and if I do I stick with the chicken nuggets, but I prefer to go to wendy's for a bacon cheeseburger and some chili MMMMM MMMM! Now that you got me all hungry, wanna go to lunch tomorrow?? hehehe |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Say it after me..:I eat Big Mac’s and I’m proud”!!! Lol. Yep, gotta admit..I love the stuff…I want my MCD!!! Everything is possible in the game of life |
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