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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-06-01 08:56 PM



Thinking of you
in moonlight's silver glow

eh...eh...
darn, my muse just left me here
right in site of you I fear
Left me here for you to see
That she's writing and not me


sleep well
this moth's going down under

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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1 posted 2002-06-01 09:01 PM




(giggles in delight) That darned muse! Hehehehe! (smiles) This is wonderfully delightful, sweet friend, you could write a second version of this poem where you go "Oh, where was I, oh yes..." and your wonderful thought finishes and the interruption is stopped! (smiles) This is a wonderfully clever poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-06-01 09:11 PM


Tita darling girl I like this it’s too cute for words. Oh has that ever happened to me. You’re right in the middle of something and it’s gone.

Excellent writing darling girl absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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3 posted 2002-06-01 09:33 PM


Titia~
LOL ... now THAT'S what you get for cleaning that desk !

Too cute you are !!
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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4 posted 2002-06-01 09:33 PM


He he Titia you're so cute....Good one!
Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-06-01 09:36 PM


Cute, Titia....


Are you counting all of your sheep to help you get to sleep?

~sleepy hugs

Lyra

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Muys
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6 posted 2002-06-02 07:59 AM


Little words
But much to say
knuffel
Mamma

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7 posted 2002-06-02 10:34 AM



thinking of you
in moonlight's silver glow
knowing in surround
comes passion's tender flow...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-02-2002 10:35 AM).]

Nan
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8 posted 2002-06-02 10:56 AM


LOL - You awake yet?

This is very cute!!!


Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-06-02 01:59 PM



Yep, I'm cute , my muse isn't though,but I know now where she went...TO SUNSHINE, that's for sure!!! YOU JUST SEND HER BACK TO ME YOU HEAR!!!

Nan, awake? YET????   you forgot that I'm six hours ahead? It's almost bedtime again LOL

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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