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His Etching
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His Etching |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
His Etching When love was new between them, she should have read of the insecurity that already breached the gap she dismissed the signs… before his entrance into her life, once, fully clothed, she had modeled for a would-be photographer the picture still graces a wall in a closet… the new he had never approved of her white gauze top, that glass of wine held by fingertips grazing chances nor her blue-jeaned limber limbs tucked in contented form or the smile that had lifted corners of thought (lucky photographer) the new he asked what else had she modeled when she had willingly given her clay to him to mold and scoffed at her “nothing” response… … he brought home an etching a nude lovely, her backside showing nice raised arm, holding up her black and white blonde hair she liked it, but wished the artist had curled the straight of hair, it would have lent elegance, she thought… the new he asked if she had posed for this and heard her “no” but didn’t see her grin nor hear her wish that, had it been, she would have asked the artist to curl her hair it still graces the bedroom wall… |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you are indeed on a roll.... very nicely done my friend... now turn just bit to the left if you would... i want to capture the sunlight |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool write  loved the ending |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noir....your art and that of the artist the dance and the display so lovely to view |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a vision painted onto the canvas with the pen.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the new he had never approved of her white gauze top, that glass of wine held by fingertips grazing chances nor her blue-jeaned limber limbs tucked in contented form or the smile that had lifted corners of thought (lucky photographer) the new he asked what else had she modeled when she had willingly given her clay to him to mold ================================= *smiling* very very cool indeed. peeling back the layers of this is like unfolding satin and lace ...or old love letters. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow!...I am speechless...and smiling... because I love this soooo much! Wonderful! ~Hugs~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Memory...this one a nice place to be....and again the forums from before there was an Ed seem to give me more than what I saw today...and certainly more than I've seen in some other days recently. Memory....I could live in it, as the old song says. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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