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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Stumbled into the perfect parade I’m in front this time no more yellow flags though there’s bound to be a crash or two just for fun these days have so many moments gotta love the adrenaline of a free rush when the good guy wins finds you in his arms write me a more perfect ending Desperate for changing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 How could there be a more perfect ending than the one in which the good guy wins? The difficulty is always in identifying who the good guy really is, isn't it? Peaceful hugs to you, good guy. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Peace Kacy...I promise, I'm a good guy. Desperate for changing |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
oh, i have my doubts about that...  really though D, no matter your moral tendencies, your poetry expresses itself vibrantly, emotionally. the images are sparse from your pen, yet somehow striking in the mind. well done, and as usual, i relate. C |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think the perfect ending’s already been written, right here.  when the good guy wins finds you in his arms now, this is the only time you’ll hear me admit you’re a good guy…savour the moment!! Lol Everything is possible in the game of life |
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TaureauRouge Junior Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 26A mass of land between two oceans |
"There's bound to be a crash or two just for fun" I like that line. Of course that would make it the perfect ending if everyone else fell down  Very nice read [This message has been edited by TaureauRouge (06-01-2002 03:48 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh another great one from you Duncan! Love the style your writing has taken on! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
haha, you made Tracey admit you're a good guy. I love it. I agree, by the way. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, I believe there can be no happier ending than the good guy winning, unless of course one can know true happiness will last forever! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I too love your writing always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great read...love the ending! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
when the good guy wins finds you in his arms write me a more perfect ending I love the little hint of almost sarcasm you always inject into your poems, Duncan...  ~ perfect ending hugs for a good guyLyra |
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