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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-06-01 10:08 AM


One Day

One day we'll be together...never to be apart again
That is when our life as one will truly begin
No more tears or waiting to see your wonderful face
I'll be long last where I belong, every day touched by your grace

It's amazing to think of all you and I have been through
After all this time, you're still the one I go to
You know all my fears, my dreams, everything there is that makes up me
You complete me in ways I can't even describe...setting my heart and soul totally free

I feel so safe with you, and loved for the very first time
So I praise you and the love you give me, in this verse and rhyme
You brighten up my days with your sunshine laugh and beautiful smile
For a bit I forget that we're still apart...you ease my troubles for a while

Everytime you hold me, I thank our sweet God above
For allowing me to cherish and hold this sweet amazing love
My heart beats only for you, you are the only one for me
You and I simply were honestly meant to be

So just hold tight a little longer, to this love you and I share
Remember that it won't always be this hard...there will come a day when I'll always be there
One day will become reality, and we won't have to go on letters and phone calls alone
I'll run to your open arms, and then I'll truly be home

I love you Jena! Happy 9 month anniversary!! )


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (06-01-2002 10:27 AM).]

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Severn
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1 posted 2002-06-01 10:20 AM


You know Amy...it's nice to see someone so happy...

Hugs, and good morning..

K

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2 posted 2002-06-01 10:35 AM


nice write aimster.  love is in the air!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-01 01:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I'm so happy to feel you're so happy, sweet friend, congratulations on your 9 month anniversary, I know Jena deep down loves you so much and she will always be there for you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love your new picture, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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4 posted 2002-06-01 02:59 PM


Beautifl write Amy...I really enjoyed reading it but not sure I understand all the personal angles of it and I don't have to. But I could feel the pure heart rend in this so it impressed me very much!
GypsyRose
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5 posted 2002-06-01 05:01 PM


This is a lovely poem. Being apart can be so hard.
vandana
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6 posted 2002-06-01 06:27 PM


enjoy
Marsha
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7 posted 2002-06-01 07:04 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is exquisite writing when you talk of your heart and your love you surely shine with a glow that illumes your writing from within. I can see your smile radiating happiness, and your heart definitely sings through this. Being apart from the one that you love is sooooooo very difficult, and yet darling you have overcome that, it has brought to you a strength that I never thought to see. You’ve always been amazingly truthful and loyal, since you found your true love you have discovered just how strong that bond is and should be. I’m so proud of you darling heart sister keep on shining bright.

Did I tell you this is utterly utterly wonderful, and that I love it? Well, if I didn’t I have now

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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