Open Poetry #20 |
Fly with Me |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fly with Me I would you with me when I ride The moon that motivates the tide Wear the silver jewels of light And dance with me throughout the night. Sail the ocean clean and clear A place of fantasy my dear. Hold my hand a rainbows walk And we will whisper lover’s talk. We’ll walk the garden of my green And you will be my only queen. We’ll listen to the birds that sing And toll the bells and make them ring. I’ll pick you flowers for your hair Only the fairest of the fair We’ll fly together in the sky Without a thought of where or why We’ll joint together in our love And fly away a single dove. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderfully romantic... I could just read your poetry forever, sweet Sy.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Come fly with me and we will fly forever. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour This is another romantic gem from your pen! "Sail the ocean clean and clear A place of fantasy my dear. Hold my hand a rainbows walk And we will whisper lover’s talk." You're just as smooth as silk over polished glass! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome, You sure know how to make a fellow feel good. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...the poetic Cyborg...You're the man! Another nicely flowing romantic piece of your poetic pie.. Thanx.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you my friend. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, she is such a lucky woman and I know she will always be blessed to fly with you close to her heart to dreams come true! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I so much enjoy a read from you each morning. This one is so soft and lyrical...lovely. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would you with me when I ride The moon that motivates the tide Wear the silver jewels of light And dance with me throughout the night. Sail the ocean clean and clear A place of fantasy my dear. Hold my hand a rainbows walk And we will whisper lover's talk. =================================== You just turned us all into butterflies with this delightful write of melody and meter me Stinkylove Who could resist this invitation to fly in the mist. "NOT I" said the moth So where does a moth book her fantasy flight to Shangri-la anyway? Randy Dragon Travel Agency? *L* I would you with me when I ride The moon that motivates the tide could that line be any cooler???? "METHINKS NOT" say the moth lol *winkiwinkie my high flying Stinky. Cant stand up for fallin apart Cant see through this veil across my heart, over you- Youll always be the one. You were the first, youll be the last [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (05-31-2002 10:22 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, Ohhhhhhh this is so entrancingly beautiful I feel as if an angel has breathed over my soul. Your writing is always special today its exceptionally so. This really is superb writing. For me darling Seymour how perfectly divine of you, I’d let you bedeck me with flowers any day Seriously I utterly utterly adore this one it has the feel of a crystal stream of living light, the beauty of heaven’s stars and the fluidity of silk. Truly exquisite writing as you always manage to do you’ve captivated me again. I love it I utterly utterly love it As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "I’ll pick you flowers for your hair Only the fairest of the fair We’ll fly together in the sky Without a thought of where or why" When you think a fantasy, you sure do make it pretty! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So beautifully romantic... I like this very much, Seymour!!! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah, Enchantress, Thank you for the lovely and the hugs. JM, Yes, Randy dragons travel agency, But be sure to take out insurance. Winkiewinkie Stinky. Marsha, And I love your replies. Martie, Always do it with flowers. Suthern, Thank you my dear, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sigh, you old romantic....I thought this was gonna be an airline commercial or something....I hate flying don't you?...Well, I mean "literal" flying.... The mouths Of stewardesses On Aeroplanes Are the most standard Mouths in the world I stare in awe At their springtime Doublespearminted smiles As they teach me all about The oxygen mask. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toe, just be glad they've been chewing spearmint... otherwise, they might smell like the last lush they hauled off the plane! LOL Sorry, Seymour. *G* I usually bombard him with my comments through email... but we're having this teensy tiny incredibly infuriating email problem! LOL) [This message has been edited by suthern (05-31-2002 03:01 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You are a talented funny guy, With a propensity for funny bones but I enjoy your humor. Suthern, LOL what else can I say. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wear the silver jewels of light And dance with me throughout the night. A beautiful romantic poem, Sy.... But if I dance with you, will you buy me some expensive jewelry? ~ hugs of silver Lyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Moon silver is about as expensive as it gets. LOL Hugs back. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour Hi there again your writing fills me with awe, it’s incredibly beautiful and so picturesque. You certainly have an incredible talent for sprinkling these blue pages with diamonds and star-studded delights. You see I’m spending way too much time with my mother I’m beginning to sound like her now, this really is something special and I love it too. Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See the diamonds in her eye a tiara for his butterfly his poet gems glittering free by his side is where she'll be |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beautiful sunshine. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Forgive me dear for not answering right away. Sometimes you just get pulled into other things. Your answer was a delight to read. And I rate you as a very good poet. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-01-2002 07:52 AM).] |
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