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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-05-31 04:01 PM


LongJohn went down to the sea
Bearing a garland of words
To honor the Sea and the Night
The Wind and the Stars
And forgot them in his passion for sea shells.

[This message has been edited by Toerag (05-31-2002 04:11 PM).]

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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2002-05-31 04:03 PM


What heck are you talkin' about, ya simple ninny!?  lol

How ya doin' Toe?

suthern
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2 posted 2002-05-31 04:07 PM


I like this very much, Toe... I've enjoyed so many of LJA's word garlands. *S* But maybe it's the lure of Lorelei that distracts him? *G*
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-05-31 04:12 PM


HaHaHa!!!!!
It sounds like something I would do....

Really good, Mr.Toe

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 2002-05-31 04:12 PM


Oooops...I meant stars, not starts....and it still sux?.....Yassee how nervous I get when the sailor comes around?
suthern
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5 posted 2002-05-31 04:20 PM


Okay... Stars is better. *G* But nervous??? Over what... the verbal whippin' you're gonna give him? LOL
Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-05-31 09:03 PM



Well Toe, I see you managed to bring LJA out of hiding...GOOD for you...

Now if we could just get Toe, LJA and 'Deer all in the same room, PARTY TIME!

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2002-05-31 09:36 PM


Haha,this is  very good. Fun.
Sandra

ethome
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8 posted 2002-05-31 09:53 PM


Well you got some response to this....I like the replies...LOL!
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