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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-31 12:53 PM

Love came as does the moon
Softness coming over me as my soul..

In all it’s strength was overcome.
Poor wretch, this soul of mine
lost in a whirlwind of emotions.
Walking the dunes of hearts
wading the stream of forgotten dreams

wandering aimlessly in search of...

Eyes lapping up the grace, the flow
swerving around curves...
Reckless abandon in flight

Riding the roller coaster of desire
from fantasy to fantasy...
Down into the tunnel of foreverly

Stopping....

Echoes of a whisper calling...
The strain of hear

Tears
A flood
Endless river in flow,
dreams lost
Love once found,
left in another’s dream
laughing as I walked
slowly
           away

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-05-31 02:11 AM

hehehe you really know how to whip it up magnus!!! as far as criticism goes.. well geez who needs to criticize.. outstanding.
Peace and hair grease
love,
joe

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2002-05-31 02:14 AM

beautifully penned, well done
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-05-31 03:45 AM

Riding the roller coaster of desire
from fantasy to fantasy...
Down into the tunnel of foreverly

take a bow would you!!

*applause* very good poet Sir~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-05-31 05:40 AM

Magnus darling boy this is again utterly utterly perfect. One day maybe you will write and I won’t nod my head saying ahhhhhhh yes that is soooooooo true. Or simply sigh because your writing takes my breath away, ………. Maybe but I doubt it. Your writing always captivates and delights me, and you have such style.

Absolutely wonderful writing as always you amaze me, with skill such as so few possess you are an outstanding writer of soul’s voice

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-05-31 07:57 AM

You picked up some great comparisons while on that searching walk.
You kind of heated up this post and then...

              "Stopping....

              Echoes of a whisper calling...
              The strain of hear

              Tears
              A flood
              Endless river in flow,
              dreams lost
              Love once found,
              left in another’s dream
              laughing as I walked
              slowly
                         away"

Clever writing indeed!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-05-31 08:02 AM

Magnus,
You just keep getting better and better. Wonderful write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-31 09:52 PM

BRAVO!!! This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a wonderful talent and you are only getting better everyday, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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