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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-05-31 06:34 AM

Sexy Korean Eyes
~Counting Rainbows~

I will kiss her and help her
slip from that fancy dress.
Then I shall admire her
succulent shapely curves
while feeling the softness
of her breast.

I will fill her
with the spice of me.
Entice her until she holds
me tight in her sweet arms of ecstasy.

And we will count rainbows
the two of us under silky
Hawaiian skies while stealing
passionate glances from her
sexy Korean eyes.

JamesLee
May31
2002

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-05-31 06:37 AM

Whew! What a sensual passionate beautiful poem this is.
This turns up the heat a notch in here.
Love how you end it with the title.....great writing James!
One of your better ones in my est.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-31 08:34 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) May you and your love always share many rainbows together all your life, sweet friend, this is passionately gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-05-31 09:33 PM

Sounds like a night full of potential.
Sandra

powerofthysword
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

4 posted 2002-05-31 10:13 PM

I really like the way you think, I have written a few poems of this nature and will
enter them some day soon. You really got
the gist of writing seductive and sensual
poetry. Paul

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2002-05-31 10:17 PM

I loved this!!!

I think it's time you visited us over in adult mr!!! I shall send you an invitation myself if necessary!!!

this plain sizzles...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

[This message has been edited by devina (05-31-2002 10:18 PM).]

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