Open Poetry #20 |
Never more relaxed |
Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
Never more relaxed Waves crashing Wind blowing threw my hair Sand beneath feet In beetween my toes Never more relaxed Never more at home The oceans sounds make a beautiful meoldy The sunset bursting with Amber, voilet Palm trees casting a never ending shadow Never more relaxed Never more at home Dolphins jumping in the distance Looking up at the stars And seeing every one Never more relaxed Never more at home Cherishing this time wiht only my wife Never more relaxed Never more at home Always a feeling of bliss ________________________________________________ Dream lands may seem out of reach but try with your heart and you will reach it. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
this poem is wonderful and it relaxed me just to read it....the perfect setting to dream dreams.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This sure made me feel relaxed as I read it! Very nice word pictures throughout! Enjoyable reading! |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Ahhh how cute....you love the beach too much! -Neala |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now I'm sooo relaxed ... zzzzzzzz Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-31-2002 09:20 AM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very nice...... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too love the sights of the ocean and every sun that rises and sets to imbue the magic of the world! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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