Open Poetry #20 |
Consumed |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Consumed how could it be you could love someone like me and yet it is true drawn right to your love the true magnet of my heart attraction divine soft as a feather is how your love conquered me knocked me off my feet fill, breathe me in now know air of loves sweetest breath a breathless release my life now starts over now that you gave me your heart your love has saved me my mind relaxes all quietens in your arms I have found my home the arms of your love true place of deepest desire a spark now is fire "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
As you already know your poetry always consumes me with it's pleasantries. I hope the one you write about is really in your life. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mm slick one lovely love stuff and the sombraro too,,,,like the pic |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey slicklady this is very romantic and devoted to love! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just when I think you have reached the apex of your talent you take it three steps farther This is magnificent! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is lovely! You are on a roll, again. |
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