Open Poetry #20 |
Depths of my Heart |
Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
In the depths of my heart I feel your essence peel out of me And pour right onto my soul I know something is holding me back From what we could have Maybe it is the stress of life Or maybe it is simply us Threw the twist and turnds of each other I want to turn the page On the book of life And write everything down To show you what is held Deep inside so then you understand Why I keep it all so hidden Under my lock and key In the depths of my heart -Neala |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very well said with tender emotions....I know this place where the heart is kept hidden...Well done... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Unlock it and bring it into the sunlight Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
I loved it. I know how you feel. I hope to see more. I love the emotionand feeling you have in it. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely expressed I know where you're coming from and you can write your way right out of it! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the depths of my heart I feel your essence peel out of me And pour right onto my soul ================================ I want to turn the page On the book of life And write everything down To show you what is held Deep inside so then you understand =================================== Hello old friend from DP ...how are you? Its good to read you again Neala... There is so much feeling in this sincere write of your heart...the longing and need to express your inner emotions is heartfelt. The gift of poetry is that our pen can say for us what we can say to someone face to face. Well done Neala take care, jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps the time is right...looks like you are already in the process of doing that...James |
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