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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-05-29 11:06 PM





A vanilla wind wafting through the trees
My heart trembling beneath Love's quiet spell
Sent from a dainty, scented, summer breeze
That captured romantic dreams in Love's well.

Rehearsing a brand new song left unsung
My soul-sent dreams of passions newly found
Could dance vanilla-beamed on my soul's tongue
Pleasures's pulse hiding bird-song's warbling sounds.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-29 11:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the sweet warbles of love always fill your ears and have your heart throbbing with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo pretty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-30 01:04 AM


This is very beautiful.

                              Dawn

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3 posted 2002-05-30 11:19 AM


*sigh* the softness of the emotion in this poem is so beautiful...I love it, Ivy...so well done...

Neala
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4 posted 2002-05-30 11:27 AM


It's so pretty!!
-Neala

ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-30 11:29 AM


You not only can see this poem unfold but you can almost taste it!   Nice writing!
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6 posted 2002-05-30 11:33 AM


Ivy Rose
A delightful read.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-05-30 02:46 PM


Very nice Ivy...James
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-05-30 02:47 PM


{sigh}
sooo wonderful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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