Open Poetry #20 |
Vanilla Wind |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A vanilla wind wafting through the trees My heart trembling beneath Love's quiet spell Sent from a dainty, scented, summer breeze That captured romantic dreams in Love's well. Rehearsing a brand new song left unsung My soul-sent dreams of passions newly found Could dance vanilla-beamed on my soul's tongue Pleasures's pulse hiding bird-song's warbling sounds. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the sweet warbles of love always fill your ears and have your heart throbbing with joy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo pretty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is very beautiful. Dawn |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the softness of the emotion in this poem is so beautiful...I love it, Ivy...so well done... |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
It's so pretty!! -Neala |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You not only can see this poem unfold but you can almost taste it! Nice writing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose A delightful read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Ivy...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
{sigh} sooo wonderful Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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