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Open Poetry #20

Immune to Reality

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-05-30 10:21 AM

I walk straight
Down the darkened street so late,
With my cane,
Inner pain,
And an emotional haze
With blank gaze.

I walk on
Eastward to meet the next dawn,
Neighborhoods
Not so good,
Local tuffs giving the eye,
I walk by.

Nothing to me they can do,
As I walk the Avenue.

Gloom

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-05-30 10:37 AM

They can do no harm ...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-05-30 10:48 AM

You walk on...very interesting...very thought provoking...thank you...

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-05-30 11:06 AM

I liked it very much....keep walking...hehe
-Neala

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-30 11:42 AM

Sounds like there's some protection in that little world of which you write.
Good one Prof!

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