Open Poetry #20 |
Relationship from Hell |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi, folks...Here's a new one, there may be spelling errors in it, because there are some words I can't spell though I can pronounce (had to look this one up too) them. I hope you can get the picture anyway... Best Wishes, Brian. "Relationship from Hell" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1: Well Jenny and Frank met about four years ago At a local pub downtown called "Two Hearts" They both got all sucked in by a convertation They really hit it off right from the start Verse 2: Frank was the typical high-school football hero All musel, no brain, teenage liquor head Jenny was a middle class girl of just few words "A sleeping beauty" her mom always said Hook 1: She wrote in her diary that Her life's finally going well Little did she know she was caught In the relationship from hell Verse 3: He treated her nice for awhile but then it stopped He began coming home drunk and dirty Then for no apperent reason he abused her And send her a mile down suicide street Verse 4: Woke up with a scream one night all covered in sweat Got to get away from this haunted house Opened her night dror, grabbed a magnum 44 She loaded it, "goodbye" no guilt, no doubt...(Bang) Hook 2: She wrote in her diary that She's finally free from his cell 'Cause she realized she was stuck In the relationship from hell Bridge Now she's running from the law But there's no more tears No more anger and pain inside Now there's no more fears She's once and for all living her life And burried the relationship from hell... Hook 3: She wrote in her diary on That subject there's no more to tell She kind of found a shortcut out Of the relationship from hell Tag: She's once and for all living her life And burried the relationship from hell... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (05-28-2002 10:10 PM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
lol - ok, i had to laugh at this - Relationship/s From hell are like the definition of my life... one can hope though, eh? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Ha ha ha ... Have you by any chance been listening to Aerosmith - Jainie's got a gun ? Joking aside; I enjoyed it, I think we all know what this one feels like ... well not literally the shooting obviously, god damn it, I've incriminated my self now *mental note* 'when in hole stop digging' . Great song/poem . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
::runs in gets guitar:: I liked it, it made me wanna play. -Neala |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good story....I enjoyed reading it! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW |
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