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. . . blissful surrender . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
blissful surrender accept my heart as your prize it was always yours Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You write the best senryus ever!  Gawd, I love this. Of course it's a keeper!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reaching golden rings round and round the merry goes laughter in the air |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine poet. I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, your words are divine always. The feelings reach from within the page, you have written this sooooooo very well Wonderful writing utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Melissa ~ Wow. Gee. You make me feel sooooooooo good  Sunshine ~ the mery-go-round moves in circles too quickly the brass ring challenge Marsha ~ Would you like to be my agent Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
circle bands of crafted gold~ Precious vows are told. |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
nice! I haven't written a senryu in forever...maybe I'll try one again soon. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee ~ of eternal vows are solid foundations built they must be cared for leafseranade ~ Good! The members here might like to read some good Senryus for a change Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-29-2002 03:07 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper~ For this gift eternal thanks to Heaven above. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
When butterflies wed Kissing the iris of trust Love rejuvenates  (smiles) Oohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, you always write the most gorgeous senryus, I had to do one just for kicks that you inspired! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee ~ Amen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ Hey! You're not supposed to write a better Senryu than me on my own blue page! Thank you my friend. Thank you , indeed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...a lot...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sweetest surrender true freedom with it now found my heart in your hands |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
hmmm... all of these are divine! Great work I. (Do you mind if I call you I? *LOL*) I can see I have much catching up to do. ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think our hearts are a prize, the only problem is getting the other person to know it. Love this. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like that...."a blissful surrender" Nicely done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
James ~ Thank you my friend Helen ~ What I said to Noah goes for you, too! i ~ You can call me I and I will call you i. OK Sandra ~ The people that count already know. By the way, I count et ~ Long time no see my friend. Welcome back Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
senually sighing from the touch of gentle hand passionate soaring *sigh* ABSOLUTELY STUNNING...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Karen ~ my ears hear your sighs my heart melts within your hands I am yours my love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-30-2002 11:28 AM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lovely *sigh* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
offerings divine I receive with open heart holding tenderly |
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