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Wings Of Love
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Wings Of Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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in the bright sunlight in the moonlight or the darkest night I know you're right here by my side to share your dreams with me. I left home to seek the answers to my destiny and that's where I found you and me searchin through a world of time. Chorus: you were young and you were free you got deep inside of me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love you were lonely you had needs and you saw your face in me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love. as the days pass by I nest your wings upon my heart's desire and make your love my special pride the essence of our dreams. Chorus: you were young and you were free you got deep inside of me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love you were lonely you had needs and you saw your face in me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome, you were lonely you had needs and you saw your face in me Prophetic words. Enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Seymour! Glad you could read this! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in the bright sunlight in the moonlight or the darkest night I know you're right here by my side to share your dreams with me. ======================================== Chorus: you were young and you were free you got deep inside of me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love you were lonely you had needs and you saw your face in me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love. ================================== E-babes...I can hear Van singing this one  love the ethereal spirit of this..and the imagery. Very cool song Eric ... you are the music man  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I know you will always make your love so happy and lucky when you sing these gorgeous songs to her, you always have the music flowing in your loving heart! (sigh) This is beautiful, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful hyeart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice ethome...one of my favorites from you...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
you were lonely you had needs and you saw your face in me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Eric, may I just say I love this?! Cause I do! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Janet....always love to hear from you!! Your comments are so encouraging! Thanks for taking the time to read and give me your input......your words are VANtastic! Noah I want to thank you for your kind and positive comments....Much appreciated!! James thank you for the reply glad you liked this! Enchantress I am so pleased that you were able to read and enjoy this little love poem....thanks! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love the lyrics ... why can't I hear the music Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interloper...It's there you just have to listen real hard....thanks so much for the comment! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric A love song is even better than the blues...beautiful in thought..and I could hear the tune in that chorus. |
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Hopeless Romantic Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27 |
I enjoyed it very much |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Martie I sure appreciate your comments as always! Welcome to Passions Hopeless Romantic. If you live up to that name you will fit in well here!! Thanks for the comment! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
et, enjoyed this cool tunes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your words sing to the heart...I love the whole feel of this poem, dear friend...hugs...  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I left home to seek the answers to my destiny and that's where I found you and me searchin through a world of time." Wow. May I keep this one, please? I would love to hear this one, sung by you. Thank you for sharing this exquisite love song. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks DS I'm glad you enjoyed! Karen....How nice to hear from you...thanks for the kind words! Midnite! Thanks for the comments and I'd like to sing it but I don't think you'd hear me! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a beautiful heart song. Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee...I heard the music but never heard the lyrics....(just kidding) maybe if Interloper and I got on the same train we hear the whole thing.... neat wite, my friend...enjoyed. jwesley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Catalinamoon and James I appreciate the kind words so much! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok. So book passage to Kansas, I'll find a cute little place for you to set up the guitar, Man...and you will have SUCH an audience... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OK I'll book the passage but you have to find me a band to back me up! Can ya do it?!? |
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