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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
totally ensnared my heart is tenderly bound am I but your prey |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
moth wings beating fast small heart pumping, what's to come? slow, the web tightens |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ I REALLY love how you do these, each with style.....  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Interloper .... "tenderly bound"...excellent. Bob |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper...if you are tenderly bound, then you are free to stay. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie! Terrific Response! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I, too, enjoy these immensly! jwesley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Yes, it does. Whether a gentle web of mutual love or a spider's web of ... well, I think you know what I mean. Lauren ~ You surely do make it hard to get my stetson on at times  Bob ~ It sure is good to have you back my friend Martie ~ What a fabulous comment. You got part of my thinking for sure. I think the last line is the question that should be addressed. Sunshine ~ Surely it was. jwesley ~ I really appreciate comments from good Texans and good Texas poets Thank you. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Talented spider spinning your silent love poem more lovely than words. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I like the piece [This message has been edited by lunatic (05-29-2002 03:01 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nancy Lee ~ Your presence here adds so much class people might be fooled by my work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-29-2002 03:23 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy this is again utterly utterly perfect. One day maybe you will write and I won’t nod my head saying ahhhhhhh yes that is soooooooo true. Or simply sigh because your writing takes my breath away, ………. Maybe but I doubt it. Your writing always captivates and delights me, and you have such style. Absolutely wonderful writing as always you amaze me  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lunatic ~ Thanx Marsha ~ I think you are the perfect reader of my offerings Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-29-2002 03:25 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
black widows whisper taunting the victim of love hit with romance flu  (smiles) Ooohhhhh..I love the lovely and haunting feel of this, sweet friend, for some reason I had spiders on the brain reading this, I gues sits because of their web and how they handle their pray! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ Does it feel funny with spiders on your mind? Does it tickle Thank you my friend Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Passionate words, you do senyrus so well. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ You always make me feel like my efforts are worthwhile, dearheart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
You do do these so good. Admiring you at Passions. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to agree you sure write these so well....this no exception! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
captured willingly by lips of sensual kiss holding close to heart *big hugs*** oh...it is sooooo good to read these again... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BS ~ Thank you. et ~ Thank you my friend ... for the visit and the comment Karen ~ I'm watching you move each sensual step closer to melt in my arms Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
swaying 'neath the moon adrift in your loving arms heart beating for you Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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