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What Did I Do So Right
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What Did I Do So Right |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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What Did I Do So Right how is it that when I touch you I feel I leave my prints when you see my colors you see all of my tints all I have to do is think of you and you inspire my words what did I do so right that to me this has occurred how do you make me feel like this you turn and I feel stirred I could whisper on a mountain top and in my soul I know you have heard no matter where you are I know I am always there we even say the same things at times there is so much we share you say you miss me even before I am gone and to your precious love I am truly drawn "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Be born? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady You can't write it better or sweeter than this. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very well written....Yanno?...I like your picture, I envy that water, it's ability to touch you entirely, all over at the same time.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, I know this feeling ever so well too, sweet friend, whenever I think of my dream girl Joanna she always inspires me and she is my motivation to encourage me to go on smiling so maybe soon I can win her heart! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Toerag! Helen this is wonderful! I adore the way your words dance themselves down the page. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you have written. . . and that is enough. . . wonderful helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
i love this poem, it is amazing. ~alisa~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
'tis the way you opened the doors to my heart, the way you let the sun into my soul, the way you touched me from afar, 'tis all these things, and so much more... I've missed you too... jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, this is so soft, yet so romantic and lovely in it's words and how you have said the feelings.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Helen, I like the poem, and I like the new pic... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I love the flow of this. It is very, very beautiful. I will be reading your work a lot, I can see! ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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