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Robert94v6
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0 posted 2002-05-29 12:34 PM



You are the one for me
but due to time and place
it seems it is no longer that way
a year that felt like a lifetime
ended because of insecurities
feelings that will not go away
forced to be forgotten
locked away with hopes of being rediscovered
I am forced to wait
to play games with time
and pray you back to me
all the while hoping
that you are the one for me
If it is so
then god will make a home for us
security, comfort, passion, and love are it's wood
to have a partner for life
is my dream come true
with your hand in mine
we will face life's problems
oblivious to all but each other
because in the end all that matters is love
and love is knowing
that you are the one for me

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2002-05-29 04:10 AM


i know these feelings. welcome to passions.

Christopher

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2 posted 2002-05-29 06:33 AM



...then god will make a home for us...

Welcome to Passions, Robert!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-29 06:33 AM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
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4 posted 2002-05-29 08:37 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS ROBERT!
This write is very impressive.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-05-29 08:37 AM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully captivating, sweet friend, your wonderful debut shines with such love and trust that I know she will always accept with joy, this is a gorgeous first post, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) Welcoe to Passions, sweet Robert, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-29 09:13 AM


Welcome to our family! I hope you enjoy your stay here, please feel free to ask questions if you like. I enjoyed your first poem and look forward to reading more from you.
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-05-29 10:34 AM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work

PS .... you might want to capitalize the "g" in God.

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8 posted 2002-05-29 10:39 AM


Robert94v6
Welcome and enjoyed your first post.

See me?
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9 posted 2002-05-29 02:01 PM


I know these feelings all too well, I'm still waiting. I hope that you will be together. God will show you the way.
Welcome to passion.
God Bless
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

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10 posted 2002-05-29 09:16 PM


Welcome to Passions. The flower of Love has to blossom at its own pace, unforced. Enjoyed the write, hope everything works out well for you, and that time will be on your side.
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