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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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behind sheer bone-- a dark of traipse to mock "atone" in recluse groan-- finger's play-- leave me alone pain indwelled... a lover spurning-- echoed hell... [This message has been edited by serenity (05-29-2002 03:25 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She is the love in her own fire that burns. I tend to think we can put it out or stroke the flames for everything they're worth. It's a tough call either way, the bitter truth runs hot and cold....it's hard to say when the kindling will take hold!!! I know these feelings Serenity~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
well at least you got bitten once... oh, that's twice shy... sorry  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shadows play behind sheer bone-- a dark of traipse to mock "atone" a priest in gather of his beads fingers splayed in recluse groan-- finger's play-- leave me alone deceased--I'd rather bleed in need... hunger's yearning-- pain indwelled... a lover spurning-- echoed hell... ============================== twice burned? does a moth know any other way? *sigh* (yktiktyk)  I remembering being one and the same ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've felt the burn of ice... excellent write, Serene one... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity It happens, loved the write.  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
boy have I felt this.....expressed nicely Karen~ Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa! You sure do paint vivid scenes here! Could you use some nomex undies  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
are there burns that we don't want to heal?? great work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Twice! Me too.. Powerful writing, Karen. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is poetically intense, sweet friend, such powerful, bittersweet desire escapes your quill and sears with sweetly painful burns of emotion! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...Serenity, loved the write...in many ways my favorite of yours. Understand every one of them too. jwesley |
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