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0 posted 2002-04-10 08:28 PM



Remembering her

I remember her at 50
I was but ten

she waved a hand and delved
into age gracefully
slicing through air and
parting waters easily,
almost giddily
high styled and highly smiled
she magnifified the act
of wrinkling admirably,
carefully,
sensuously,
well.

Now I’m this age,
my granddaughter is ten
this day…
I look at pictures of
forty years gone
she still looks good,
and while I'll never mirror her,
I look better than then…
perhaps her genes
fit my soul

they feel like it…

and if I mature…
when I grow old…

I’ll borrow her style
and class
knowing it’s no act
refining grace to polish fact

that an art defined
is a part re-mined
through show and tell

as she told me, very well…

act the age within your heart
and the fountain of youth will never depart.

In honor of Grandmother Beth, 90 and full of wisdom...


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-10 08:32 PM


This was so so  nice Kiralea and oh how very true. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-04-10 08:32 PM


And so you are doing....as you are acting
the age that befits you well....your fountain
of youth will never dry...

Beautiful Poem Karilea..

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3 posted 2002-04-10 08:36 PM


I'm smiling... as I look at a wonderful photo of my own 99 yr old Grammie...

Thank you, Sunshiny Lady

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4 posted 2002-04-10 08:38 PM


Amazing...amazing how when we can be an age and remember when our mother or grandmother was that age...and in our minds we really feel so young and realize that they too at that age must have felt young also.  Somehow through that rambling I know you understood what I was trying to say...right? Hope so.  
This is wonderful Karilea...wonderful!
~Hugs~

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5 posted 2002-04-10 09:58 PM


act the age within your heart
and the fountain of youth will never depart.
=========================

thank you for sharing her wisdom with us...
and never doubt you inherited her class and grace
love the admire of her in this K.

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6 posted 2002-04-10 10:02 PM


Words of wisdom from a true lady!!!!Great poem dear friend!!
Saunni
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7 posted 2002-04-10 10:04 PM


Beautiful, beautiful, I have to say! Wonderful write!

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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8 posted 2002-04-11 07:33 AM


when I was 10 I was 50 in my mind
wanting to be

now that I am 50 I am about 25 in my mind
wanting to be

but have heard that I act 10..

enjoyed this sunshine

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9 posted 2002-04-11 08:20 AM


Morning.... I like the thoughts... and the wisdom shared...


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10 posted 2002-04-11 08:35 AM


Kari darling sister of my heart Oh my how wonderful she looks in the picture you’ve painted here. YOU are as elegant and charming and talented.

Utterly beautiful writing, do you ever do anything less than beauty, no darling girl you don’t, wonderful This is utterly gorgeous I love it. darling heart

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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11 posted 2002-04-11 09:47 AM


Beautiful tribute

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12 posted 2002-06-07 07:06 AM



Thank you all...
she's quite a gal...

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