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Shadows And Salty Bricks
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Shadows And Salty Bricks |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Shadows And Salty Bricks are you the answer to the whisper of a silent prayer the start of a miracle I can truly share can you teach me words that I do not know show me feelings I now cannot show it’s just a simple secret that I somehow forgot another lock that got tangled in a twisted knot past has found me on my knees as I wept till I started collecting salty bricks and hid them in my silence kept please free me from this place within my head that told me dreams could never be and caused me so much dread when you hold me now am I just a shadow thin or has the wall started falling down in repair back to whole again "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Wow, you have written a poem here that speaks volumes, and expresses your emotion very well. I hope you find the answers to your questions, but from what I read here, I do feel you are on the right track.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Helen, I know just how you feel, but I also know deep down you will prevail and all your dreams will come true as you crash through the wall that held you prisoner before, just always believe in yourself! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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