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Open Poetry #20

Unexpectedly (Part 2)

kellinjar
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2002-05-27 02:45 PM

Unexpectedly the curtain falls
you are gone, not here at all
lost for a time, perhaps forever
missing in the rain, in stormy weather
kicking at the puddles, lost in ponderance
alone and wet, for how long shall we dance
dreaming of... lost in fantasy
being without you, is a tragedy
of the heart, of the mind
in my soul, what will I find
will it be what I find in yours
why must love fester on me as a sore

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Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2002-05-28 09:24 PM

tough question, melancholy review. well done.

Chris

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

2 posted 2002-05-28 10:16 PM

I just has to check this one out too, It's just as good writing as no. 1

Best Wishes,

brian.

kellinjar
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

3 posted 2002-05-29 01:13 AM

Thank you I am glad to find a place where people can enjoy what I have created

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Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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