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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Hot Wringing the water from my hair, an unexpected moment, to find this man watching; I rise from the sea from waves that captured me, and the sand -- the sand is so hot, and I wonder: are you a good stranger or a bad one? © 2002 Corinne Bailey |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I suppose I shall have to write of Cold, just to see if I could do it as well as you've done Hot... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent...could easily see this...and such a natural question... Hopefully a good one... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always lie on the sands and be greeted by a friend that will always bring great comfort and peace to you! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
is it only after a hot spell that this question is asked?...neat portrayal of the unexpected  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Strangers are't good or bad...they're just, er, strange  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
If you are that unsure by looking at him, best to just avoid the situation in this day and age... lol Nice job. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
very cool (hot), and unexpected! one would hope it's a good, bad stranger! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well was he good or bad?...or did he remain a stranger...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
he is the life guard and you are in a no swim zone? I bet he is baaad dug the poem Cor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ What intrigue ...  Pause in that moment of contemplation ... he'll provide the answer in a heartbeat ! I suspect ... 'inquisitively interested'~ 'Bad' can be sooooooooo 'good'~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
freeze that moment Corinne. . . yes. . . that one moment where wonder speaks. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
and Balladeer is stranger than anyone we know right?....You know I had to look at this one titled "Hot".... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne Good write, enjoyed. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone! Just a quicky! Ha, ha, Toe - you just can't pass up a chance to pick on ole Deer, can 'ya? No lifeguard, D - beaches I went to didn't have lifeguards. Coves tucked in between rocks. Cor |
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