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Love Pure Has Promise
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Love Pure Has Promise |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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When a love is given purely and from within the very soul Of times and in moments surely this love, once felt, for time will hold When a heart reaches out in kindness and never of just most simple desire This love is seen beyond blindness further reaching than flames of fire If love’s given just physical with feelings only the moment whispers jaded, not mystical are all is given, all is lent Words said and left on honest eyes by eyes of one who is not seen Singing a tune’s hidden surprise from a heart of fat and no lean. Promise not that you will not keep upon the ears and eyes of heart whispering soft in slumber’s sleep to wake, to take, to tear apart. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-31-2002 02:06 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "When a heart reaches out in kindness and never of just most simple desire This love is seen beyondblindness further reaching than flames of fire" Love is more then fire and flame it is the quiet in not giving blame more then just a melt of eye are understanding and forgiving sighs You inspired me! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Barry, Now you know that I am not entirely used to a big old sigh in the afternoon. You usually reserve that for the evenings... But, I'll tell you, I sure could get used to this pretty quick!! Love this piece my friend. ~Hugs...in the afternoon~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
"When a love is given purely" You, my dear friend, are a man who knows more about love and understands more than anyone I have ever known...Magnificent writing...hugs  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Purely beautiful, in all the most important ways. ThisDiamond |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Such a sad song, Magnus... beautiful, and seemingly full of remorse... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ 'When a love is given purely and from within the very soul Of times and in moments surely this love, once felt, for time will hold' Oh ... stunned into a simple WOW~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, all love should be offered pure, otherwise it could become tarnished and it only hurts so many! (sigh) This is so very well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautifulheart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And you purely show much love in your poetry, and replies. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lots of truth in these words of yours Magnus! Love should be the most special and important emotional contact between souls in one's life. The real thing is nothing to be taken lightly. Good write!! Eric |
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