Open Poetry #20 |
Lover's Eyes |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whispers fall on my ears as soft as falling snow Words of love and of tears these whispers that we know Songs once sung in a tune that carry in the night Soulful cry of the loon beneath the moon in light Sighs born and bound in lust of passions when entwined Sparkling fall of star’s dust into the eyes once blind Lips that trail in skin’s trace on waters of the stream Tender hold of one’s face together in one dream Eyes that blaze with the flame of ecstacy and more Lover’s lost in their game beyond the closing door When the fall of one star from heavens comes to be Lover’s eyes in gleam are of love when meant to see |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Super Barry! Your writing has taken on a bit of a different syle it would appear lately... AND I am enjoying every one of them.... I'm off to lalaland... I can see Luna from my bedroom window, She inspires me...so off I go. ~Nite, Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Nancy, pleasant dreams tonite under the moon... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always see magic through loves eyes and may you always be touched by its joy! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Now THAT is poetry I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...PASSIONATE POEM!!! Beautiful poetic, words that dance through the heart and linger on the soul. ***Ivy Rose |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
Beautiful...just BEAUTIFUL. I am quite speechless. Great job. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy what can I say except this is utterly utterly wonderful. I swear your writing gets better daily, almost hourly it has always been utterly utterly incredible. As always to bathe in the wonder as delivered by the pen of the master of morning starts my day. I think that if my soul isn’t ignited by that special Magnus spark then it slumbers through the day, and never really gets going. Wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Your poems always give so much enjoyment when I read them. Thank you for sharing. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So soft and sensual, Barry. Written like a dream Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry There is something about love under the moonlight and you have captured the feelings perfectly. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Sighs born and bound in lust of passions when entwined Sparkling fall of star’s dust into the eyes once blind ahhhhhhh... gorgeous. You seriously need to publish a book, if only just for me That way each night I can read a bit of it and sleep with all these beautiful poems covering me over like a soft blanket. I'm sure I'd wake up feeling just lovely every day. So, Magnus - what do you say? Pretty please? hmmm??? ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Noah, my friend...always enjoy your review Skyfire...THAT is a nice reply..thanx much Ivy....I do always enjoy your thoughts... thank you... Cowgirl....pleased to meet you on the pages. Thank You very much.. Mushy dearest....thanx much from you too.. always enjoy your thoughts.. Cause there are always tons of them....Love it!! Vandana...thanx, as always.. SmartChick...that is what it is all about. giving someone a smile...That pleases me.. Sandra, I am still working on it...when I figure out how to start dreaming it..I will let you know... Sue, thank you dear one...you are ever so kind to me.. IceQueen...would a monogram on a pillow with a poem written suffice?....I will probably procrastinate on the book until the 12th Thursday of the 5th Monday or therebouts... ThanK You very much.... |
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