Open Poetry #20 |
Lost in the Found |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just when I finally found myself, I lost myself in you. And then when I thought I'd lost you, I found myself again, heartbreaking in blue. I went to the Lost and Found, but no one recognized your name. And when you suddenly came back to me, I lost myself again... in you. I like being lost, when you are the one who finds me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, this feeling can indeed be so dizzy and roundabout in its logic, but I knw deep down through this tornado in the end the aftermath will be hopeful and much comfort and joy will come to our hearts! (smiles) This is a wonderful metaphor, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Didn't mean to make anyone dizzy. Thanks, Noah. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah Kacy, this is so sweet. It sure is a great feeling to be found huh? Lost? No…methinks someone has found the map of you. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hugs to you, sister poet of heart. And I'd like to stay lost this way forever. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
"Just when I finally found myself, I lost myself in you." I know how this feels. I have been there too. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hugs to you too, for getting lost in love. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice to find someone once in awhile,instead of permanent loss. Sandra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Love it.... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kacy....this is beautiful enough to grace a card for just about anyone.... Well done! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sandra, thanks. Yes, it's a good feeling. Connie, thanks! Magnus, what a kind reply! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You did a wonderful job of describing that wonderful dizzying feeling, Kacy... I know that feeling well and I'm glad to hear that you do too! ~ dizzy being in love hugs Lyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now you've been lost and then found but then lost again....so that made for a nice little poetic trip to go on!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lyra, YES, it's a wonderful experience. Eric, LOL, it is a fun trip. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Kacy, you sound like the love bug bit ya! Mmmm, dizzy but nice feeling huh? I love this happy song you're singin'. ~Dizzy Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nancy, glad you enjoyed this little love note. Love bugs are the only bugs I keep at home, the rest get evicted. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy, I appreciated the whimsy in this lovely...it made me smile... when poetry does that, it's a Keeper... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
clever work here..how nice and reassuring it must be to play hide-and-seek with someone who never tires of being the seeker? |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
very interesting and just how true isn't it? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And when you suddenly came back to me, I lost myself again... in you. I like being lost, when you are the one who finds me. Reminds me of that new roller coaster in Disneyland...the ERFKAD!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, So...am I the only one getting dizzy here? I thought the lost and found was closed. So are you guys together or not? Huh? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing like being found by the right person...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Its truly interesting how beginnings are found when an end seems lost .... or was that endings begin when losses are found .... no, maybe its lost ends are found beginnings ... now I am getting dizzy!!!! Sending dizzy smiles your way KC!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
love this idea - great follow through. likin' it, likin' it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I mean this as a compliment 'cause you know me right? Email this to Blue Mountain - this should be on a card Kacy, really! Great job. There is nothing means more to me than |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Big thanks and hugs to each of you, my wonderful friends. I'm only half awake, no java in my system yet, but I am delighted with your replies to this one, which at first had me running around in circles mentally until I relaxed and let it flow naturally. And yes, 'tis true, the midnitesun will soon be shining over the Rockies. I'm already dizzy, so the altitude shouldn't even be noticeable. |
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