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Krissy
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0 posted 2002-05-02 06:08 PM


Her Smile

The first thing you see is her smile
That’s what everyone says
She has an amazing smile
It warms you right through
To your soul
You can feel it miles away
It’s so comfortable
So happy, carefree and
Bright, yes always bright
You can see it feel it
In her words, it’s in her voice
In her touch
In everything she is
You see her smile

Then there’s love, so much love
It cloaks you with warmth
With her spirit which
Seems to pour from her
She’s always the same
Loving, warming
Welcoming
Never leaves anyone
Left out, cold or lonely
She gathers those she loves
Hold them, loves them
In all she does and says
You see her love

Then there’s her laughter
It’s so infectious
She giggles still
Her eyes crinkle up
As she laughs oh
How she laughs, loudly
Giggles through jokes
She can’t tell them
Never ask her to tell a joke
She cannot do it
She giggles and laughs
All through
That’s all you hear
Is her laughter

Her smile warming
Her love comforting
Her laughter infectious


Who is she?

?

It’s my mum
Mushy Marsha
Or course

Krissy

Dedicated to my mum Marsha, who is ever loving, and warm, who always is there when she’s needed, and even when she isn’t.
To those who think our rivalry is anything other than a game, please note it isn’t we are just having fun.
I love you my mum and this is especially for you


And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-05-02 06:10 PM


Awww Krissy,
I knew who you were talking about. And it all applies to you too, I'm sure. What a lovely tribute to your mother. Very nice.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-02 06:13 PM


Heh heh. Cute.
Aimster
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3 posted 2002-05-02 06:15 PM


Krissy,

this is so precious! beautiful words from
your heart...and this does describe our
Marsha perfectly! she and you both have a
beautiful heart and smile. it's such a
pleasure to be loved by you both...just
a georgeous write sweetie...God bless you
both. Take care.
Love you.
Amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-05-02 08:51 PM



I love quizzes
but this was not hard
where a smile glows
like crystal shards
and who grew a
daughter, like you


Magnus
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5 posted 2002-05-02 09:00 PM


Krissy,  the answer was obvious, but at the
same time...I feel it also could apply to
the daughter as well...You show a great love
of our dear Mushy...She and you are both
very blessed to have each other...

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6 posted 2002-05-02 09:29 PM


Krissy~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
I love your quizzical Mum~
You two have SO MUCH FUN together~
It's refreshing to see the 'word-spar' that takes place~

Only LOVE would allow it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ShadowRider
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7 posted 2002-05-02 11:21 PM


HiYo Krissy!  How's a gal, huh?  *smile*

only one laugh, one smile,
one infectuous burst of joy
this could be, Maaaaaaasha....
How incredibly fortunate you are, Krissy
as Marsha is, as well.
A living testament, written in truth.

All my best, and apologies for my absentism (been buzzzy, er busy)
jeff

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8 posted 2002-05-02 11:29 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too have seen your mom's picture on this site and I know deep down her smile must always bring cheer to you and every one of her friends, as you always do! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, may your mom always bring a golden smile of pure love to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-05-02 11:39 PM


LOL! I knew when I was reading it who it was about. You must be feeling a little guilty about raiding the fridge lately

A wonderful job, Krissy

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2002-05-03 01:31 PM


absolutely wonderful Krissy and a delight to read  and know of her..*s

hugsss
M

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11 posted 2002-05-29 10:45 AM


Gee, I must sound like a broken record....
I love it!
We only thought we knew something of Marsha

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12 posted 2002-05-29 11:29 AM


awww Krissy, so lovely hon....
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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