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Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-05-02 01:30 PM

Essence of Sense

Sighing inside
The bide of why
I touched
The thought of sought
And followed it to
The place of safe retreat
Where it flew to you
Leaving this kiss
Held within the spin
Times line
Drifted sifted
Over my soul’s when
Then I found
Love’s flower bower

The scent of meant
Wreathed my breathe
With essence of sense
As I circled the
Touch of heart
I felt then knelt
In prayer of save me
From disaster master
Then felt it
Enter my center
Gifting me with
Loves breeze of we

True of trust doesn’t rust
Happiness of
Heart restart
Into the hope of days play
Then the when
And why of sigh
Sends the mend to
Soul’s hole
Sealing the rift
In hearts shift
Peace and love
Give this gift
In wonders sigh

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-05-02 01:36 PM

In prayer of save me

I love your reversal of wordings..and the play in your words..*s nicely done

M

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-05-02 01:49 PM

KrissyDearest~

You spun me in the spiral
of gentle thoughts in flow
Then as I was wondering
just which way to go ..
You picked me up
and dropped me off
at my favorite part~

'Happiness of
Heart restart'

*Hugs* n' *Love* to you sweetie~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-02 05:58 PM

"In hearts shift
Peace and love
Give this gift
In wonders sigh"

YAY!!! Oh Krissy, I have missed your wonderful words so so much, this is absolutely wonderful, your talent continues to grow so much every day, I just love the puns and rhyming within the same lines that you put into this poem, this is superb! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-05-29 10:48 AM

True of trust doesn’t rust
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Really, I could have put down many more lines that struck my fancy, but this one struly spoke to me

What a talent you have!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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