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If By Chance, Was Love To Be
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If By Chance, Was Love To Be |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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If but through chance was love to be in want of once most tenderly If but one time would kiss be placed upon moist lips of lines when traced Can love be born again anew if twice in scorn of then askew Where longing sigh brings the embrace when tears of cry streak upon face Soft of the morn in ray of light beheld by eyes of gifted sight Song of two hearts in melody words of one tune in memory Lost to a dream of loving grace Left to begin this slumber race Taken by hand in want of thee If but one chance is love to be Twins of morrow living apart beating shallow from in the heart Found in a meadow’s garden new Lost in a shadow once of two [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-25-2002 10:50 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy you lines have a way of wafting over my heart like a song that I remember but feel is new. The familiarity of trust but the freshness of unique, do I love this you know I utterly utterly do. There is within your writing something superior, something that makes it finer and better crafted that makes it incredibly special. Truly this is exceptional    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Oh my goh, you truly, to me, are the "Phoenix of Shakespeare"! (smiles) This is powerful and filled with such cadence, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, weet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is beautifull Barry. Love that last stanza Twins of morrow living apart beats of shallow from the heart Found in a meadow’s garden new Lost in a shadow once of two *sigh* If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply beautiful!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Barry! ~Mega Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy...what can I say that I have not said a hundred fold before.... Thank You darling girl! Noah, my friend, thank you for your kindness. Tracey, most pleasing that you enjoyed this little piece of my poetic pie...thanx... PoetD...Love your dedications tonite... Very beautiful what you are doing... Thanx for your reply... Nancy....MEGAHUGS back atcha...thanx dear lady of the north... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Again you capture my heart with yours. Hugs! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Lost to a dream of loving grace Left to begin this slumber race Taken by hand in want of thee If but one chance is love to be Twins of morrow living apart beating shallow from in the heart Found in a meadow’s garden new Lost in a shadow once of two Very relatable tonight, Barry. but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* I love every single word...this is one of your absolute best!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, this strikes me right in the heart. Awesome writing, Barry. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
More than a poem this sound of token from a poet softly spoken |
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