Open Poetry #20 |
I Need You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I need you like the flowers Who rely upon the rain I need you like good medicine To take away my pain I need you like the clouds To shelter me from the sun I need you to be here When my heart becomes undone In your presence I feel so radiant As my face begins to glow How comfortable I feel when I'm with you As love continues to bloom and grow With you here by my side There'll be nothing for me to fear You'll always remain a part of me Whether you're far or near I rest my head upon your shoulder And gaze into your eyes of blue How warm and oh so tender Are these feelings I have for you You put your arms around me And how we fit like hand in glove How wonderful it is To be surrounded by your love Suetang |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Very sweet! ^.^ I enjoyed this. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. I love I love it utterly utterly. The questing thought of love is exquisitely written darling heart, absolutely exquisite. You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling heart utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another treasure from the land down under given to us all to enjoy and savor each syllable and word... Thanx Sue...you are a gem yourself...as are your words... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may true love always fill your heart and surround you with loves sunshine forever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thak you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: A beautiful, romantic poem. The feelings expressed are lovely! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ahh, Sue, what a wonderful feeling…what a wonderful love. Hang on to it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Sounds like this should be put to music! Love the romance lyrics. Shenachie |
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