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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-24 06:39 PM


I need you like the flowers
Who rely upon the rain
I need you like good medicine
To take away my pain

I need you like the clouds
To shelter me from the sun
I need you to be here
When my heart becomes undone

In your presence I feel so radiant
As my face begins to glow
How comfortable I feel when I'm with you
As love continues to bloom and grow

With you here by my side
There'll be nothing for me to fear
You'll always remain a part of me
Whether you're far or near

I rest my head upon your shoulder
And gaze into your eyes of blue
How warm and oh so tender
Are these feelings I have for you

You put your arms around me
And how we fit like hand in glove
How wonderful it is
To be surrounded by your love

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
elfin_tigress
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Someplace
1 posted 2002-05-24 06:50 PM


Very sweet!  ^.^
I enjoyed this.

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Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2002-05-24 06:51 PM


Sue darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. I love I love it utterly utterly. The questing thought of love is exquisitely written darling heart, absolutely exquisite.

You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling heart utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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3 posted 2002-05-24 07:00 PM


Another treasure from the land down under
given to us all to enjoy and savor each
syllable and word...  Thanx Sue...you are
a gem yourself...as are your words...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-24 10:12 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may true love always fill your heart and surround you with loves sunshine forever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thak you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
5 posted 2002-05-25 07:09 PM


Sue:  A beautiful, romantic poem.  The feelings expressed are lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2002-05-25 10:56 PM


Ahh, Sue, what a wonderful feeling…what a wonderful love. Hang on to it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bridget Shenachie
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Kansas USA
7 posted 2002-05-26 12:31 PM


Sounds like this should be put to music!  Love the romance lyrics.

Shenachie

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