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Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-05-24 05:44 PM

I found you standing there
Waiting for me to come
Touch your hand
Lead you away from here
I saw what was written behind your eyes
My mind was overwhelmed by your thoughts
I never knew that you would become the one
As you release your hand from mine
I watch you walk away
The one
My one
Gone forever
As you were leaving
I felt you whisper in my ear
"I will always love you"

Love Always,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-05-24 05:54 PM

Turning away, tears falling,
feeling the fresh of a breeze
Hearing the thought, calling
within a moment, to sieze..

I will always love you....

I have said these words countless times...
even in the thought of leaving...leaving
behind a treasure...

Beautiful words written, tender feelings
expressed...

Lovely write!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-05-24 05:59 PM

Very beautifully penned!
Enjoyed the read this evening..
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-05-24 06:55 PM

Ladycat darling girl this is absolutely beautiful your writing content and style consistently superb and this is as always absolutely perfect.

I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece you have excelled yourself.

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2002-05-24 06:56 PM

liked it

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2002-05-25 11:44 AM

I like this a lot, hon - it reminds me of a mutual friend of ours.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-05-25 11:49 AM

Well done! A real pleasurable read!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2002-05-25 12:37 PM

This is sad.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-05-25 12:50 PM

sighing..I believe in "seizing the moment" if possible...

a beautiful message
M

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2002-05-26 12:36 PM

What soft sadness. I understand this far too well…every word.

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