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Open Poetry #20

Patience

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-25 05:10 PM

Patience

I watched as the skies turned gray
in and out, the sun tried its power
and not till now did it hold its own.
Inside I am seeking my way
listening for the ring of time,
a chime to break my aloneness.
I look towards the silence
with wandering emotions
up, down, in, out
round and round I spin, lost
in the control of you.
So warm am I, fans blowing
long in shirt, buttons undone
building a scenerio of you.
I am my Alice seeing double,
her twin the Lady O,
with nakdthoughts unspoken,
all of us waiting
'til next we meet.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-05-25 05:35 PM

MizWynter~

'the sun tried its power
and not till now did it hold its own'

Such an original idea ... lovely~

I hope to see the whole poetic clan show up~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-05-25 05:46 PM

Nicely done!
"So warm am I, fans blowing
                 long in shirt, buttons undone
                 building a scenerio of you.
                 I am my Alice seeing double,
                 her twin the Lady O,
                 with nakdthoughts unspoken,
                 all of us waiting
                 'til next we meet."

Sort of like a signature verse for you!!

Good work!

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