Open Poetry #20 |
Timeless |
RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
There is an age within her eyes A wisdom's sparkle neath her lids A betrayal of endless summer night And all the warmth that comes with it. She smiles and a room lights to see her Ivory grin more bright from the feeling And all the world sees her fervor As the room lights floor to ceiling. No worry adorns her delicate brow Whereupon should be placed a crown For she rules my heart somehow And its throne she rests upon. What gift could one give to such as she? What token of admiration could dare To shine brighter than her? It couldn't be None could dare to compare. So I fawn to thee, my day and night My sun and moon and stars. And give you my heart in endless flight To you, wherever you are. Chivalry is not dead. I saw it coughing up lung butter last night, but it was still alive. I think it has parvo. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSEvans A very good write, I enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well this is as a romantic a vision as one is going to read! I hope you find her and I hope you clone her for me. I live a long way away so there'll be no mix-ups. Just send her to Mr. Romantically inclined #1 Available St. Passion Hills Eldorado....This Planet! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RSEvans~ It's so very nice to see you here again~ 'She smiles and a room lights to see her' What an absolutely enchanting thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh My! This piece is just one huge sigh! And I am smiling from ear to ear.... This is exquisite...and I'm keeping it!! ~Sigh Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, RS! So good to see you again! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For she rules my heart somehow And its throne she rests upon. What gift could one give to such as she? What token of admiration could dare To shine brighter than her? It couldn't be None could dare to compare. A sentiment I very much understand. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You just may have her and not even realize it my sweet... these things are molds in the making sometimes... very sweet edition of you Rob!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. Thanks, T for making me smile, and I'll see you in the good forum |
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