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Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

0 posted 2002-05-24 11:34 PM

Ending

As you turn on your heel
your back to my front
and walk away

Only then
do the tears
cloud my vision

Wait

Stay long enough
to wipe the tear from my eye
long enough
for me to tell you

I love you

[This message has been edited by Tracey (05-24-2002 11:35 PM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-05-24 11:37 PM

This is sad and simple, and actually, quite lovely.

Nan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-24 11:41 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Tracey, this is so very heartbreakingly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope this is not a current feeling you have and now you can always confess how much you love your love without having to say goodbye ever! (sigh) This is so very touching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-05-24 11:41 PM

Well written pain, Tracey. I'm so sorry your tear did not get wiped away with lover's kiss.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-05-24 11:41 PM

Amazing what you'll do on a dare. Sorry, darlin...I owed ya one!
You know I know.

but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how
to get it back to good

MB20

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-05-24 11:47 PM

A lovely poem, Tracey...it sounds straight from your heart.

~ loads of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-05-24 11:50 PM

Beautiful Tracey....
So nice to see you posting here again.
~Heart Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

7 posted 2002-05-25 12:07 PM

if it was a challenge, it was well met (for a redhead

)

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2002-05-25 12:16 PM

Thanks Pilgrimage, I appreciate the kind words

Ah Noah, you’re comments are always so heartfelt. Thanks sweetie

Kacy, yes, I’m sorry too. Some things just have to be I guess. I’ve got that song running through my head “you can’t always get what you want”. But I wouldn’t trade the memories for all the gold in the world.

Dunc, ah baby…you know how to press my buttons…a dare will always do it!! and yeah, I know you know too….i know

Lyra, yes, it is straight from my heart. Thanks for the hugs…I kinda need them tonight

Nancy Lee, thanks so much…I haven’t been around much lately….dealing with my own personal drama I call life!! Lol. thanks for the hugs…they’re much welcomed tonight

Christopher, the poem was already written…the challenge was whether I’d post it. and hey, that’s high praise comin from a redhead basher!!! lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-05-25 01:02 AM

touching the heart here Tracey....

I felt this

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2002-05-25 01:16 AM

Wait

Stay long enough
to wipe the tear from my eye
long enough
for me to tell you

I love you
========================

no fair...making a moth cry before bed....
heart-hugs guys.
( where are the witty words when ya need them)
*sigh*

mothyme

I remembering being one and the same ...
closer even than the heat and the flame.

Tom Kimmel

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

11 posted 2002-05-25 06:16 AM

beautiful post that touched my heart, well penned
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-05-25 09:04 AM

Simply put, very touching...enjoyed this
one Tracey...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-05-25 09:35 AM

Tracey,you and Duncan are getting too good with these sad ones.I wish you two were happier again.
I have exactly felt this poem, and it hurts.
Sandra

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2002-05-25 06:06 PM

liked it

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