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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-25 12:03 PM

Kindle

atone for sins
you could not commit
searching intent
with perfect fit
colors slide
between small cracks
the candle gone
melted into air wax
the day tucks
it’s self to sleep
with lit memories
from darkness keep
a fire in hearth
does not die
it kindles again
with softest sigh

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-05-25 12:05 PM

This is just downright pretty!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-05-25 12:12 PM

1slick_lady
Yes downright pretty.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-05-25 12:25 PM

beautiful.......

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2002-05-27 07:51 AM

glad you all liked...helen

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-05-28 03:24 PM

Rekindling for the brain

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-05-28 04:12 PM

spark, perhaps??

well done helen. . .

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-28 11:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the embers of true love sapek always shine within you and light with purity and trust forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

8 posted 2002-05-28 11:23 PM

AND THE POEM ITSELF IS SHAPED LIKE A CANDLE!!! i was like , whoa dude.

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