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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-05-25 12:00 PM


I Will Remember You
~For A Special Friend~

Some kids grow up given lots of confidence
Others grow up being told they make no sense
Given no encouragement to even want to try
I just let things go pass me right on by
Always being to what I could and couldn't do
I felt like there was just no use

After I left home it took me so many years
Just to get over all of those fears
Of never being able to be good enough
Sometimes it felt as if life was just too tough
Still I would keep on struggling right through
Then several years later I met someone like you

Even though I wasn't anywhere near as good as you
You kept on encouraging me right on through
Encouragement you gave me right from the start
To continue writing what was in my heart
Inspirations you would often send me
It was as if you saw something in me I didn't see

I always knew I was no one special and never would be
Still when I met you, you accepted me just for being me
That meant more to me than you will ever know
Cause with you my confidence started to grow
And, even though I started alot later in life
I will remember you each time I start to write
By Sue 5-25-02




[This message has been edited by SmartChick (05-25-2002 12:05 PM).]

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-25 12:09 PM


Oh I don't believe it for a minute Sue! You are special because you're open and honest and state your feelings. I for one think this is just wonderful to read and my hat's off to that special guy that brought it out in you!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-05-25 12:16 PM


SmartChick
It was there all the time. Enjoyed

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-05-25 12:17 PM


OhSweetSuzieQ~
You are all I saw and MORE~

Your sincerity of feelings just pours down the page with ease~
You know that I love this ... and I thank you from my heart~

You give me little *goosie-bumps* each time I read it ... thank you, my poetess friend~
I love you dearly~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
4 posted 2002-05-25 12:24 PM


This sounds like a real special friend, Sue.

Someone who knew the real you, even before you, yourself did.
He/she could see what was always there....but it was just never obvious to you.

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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