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Fake or Original ? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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crowds collect Light beams through vaulted roofs filtered through finds a selected few halos glint reflected icon tint... "this is exactly how it was a true version of the original, only its a copy going way, way back" crowds thin out instead light becomes a thread finds a selected one eyes squint recognized tarnished tint "but which one is real it's is not as it should feel, look how the artisan instilled his ways" so it is when public strays. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-25-2002 08:26 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Are you real or memory still the feel is you and me I would think but thought instead that you are real here in my head...  liking this very much! as from you a special touch... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
but which one is real it's is not as it should feel, look how the artisan instilled his ways" so it is when public strays. Well done, Martin...this is a good representation of modern life.... there is no loyalty any more, and people buy so many cheap imitations.  ~ real hugs...not imitationsLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for the real hugs, have seen so many antiques around, whose to say what hasn't been touched over  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
there is something churchy here though |
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