Open Poetry #20 |
Break (Sincerely) |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Break (Sincerely) How's it gonna be when we break? I don't want my heart to ache. (but it will) Will I be able to live without you? Looking like I'll probably have to. I am willing to beg you not to leave me but what good will it do if it is your desire to be free of me. I need to scream. I want to shout. Any chance of us working this out? Perhaps we could but you seem to have your doubts. I know that you want my permission to go. And I will give it to you if thats what you want to do. Honey I don't want to break with you. (but I will) Now tell me none of this is real. Sincerely, JamesLee May25 2002 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Work toward the holding study the molding life's built in adjust lay quality in trust... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, I hope she certainly does not want to break up with a wonderful person like you, sweet friend, you are so very special and I know your true love will always be happy to have you and if she doesn't want you, she doesn't deserve you! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I hope it's not real James...I hope she stays for good and warms the very depths of your soul.........nice write! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful sadness in this piece, James.... It reminds me of the day my first husband died. I asked him not to go, but he had to....and then I asked him if he could take me with him, but he couldn't. Finally, I asked him to send me a sign that he was still there...and he did. It is written in my poem, posted a bit earlier...for Larry, "Flutter by" ~ hope all is well with you hugs Lyra |
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