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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-05-26 12:59 PM


all credit given to the Beach Boys and thier song "409"

She's real fine my Poet deVine
She's real fine Poet deVine
My Poet deVine

Well I saved my lyrics and I saved my rhymes
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
For I knew there would be a time
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine )
When I would meet that Poet deVine
(Poet deVine, Poet deVine)
Giddyup giddyup giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet de...

Nothing can catch her
Nothing can touch my Poet deVine
Poet deVine ooooo
(Giddyup giddyup oooo)
(Giddyup giddyup oooo)
(Giddyup giddyup oooo)
(Giddyup giddyup up)

When I read her poems she really shines
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
She always turns the coolest rhymes
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
My four beat dual couplet anapestic Poet deVine
(Poet deVine, Poet deVine, Poet deVine, Poet deVine)

Giddyup giddyup giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet deVine
(Giddyup Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet de...

Nothing can catch her
Nothing can touch my Poet deVine
(Poet deVine Poet deVine Poet deVine Poet deVine)
Giddyup Poet deVine
(Poet deVine Poet deVine Poet deVine Poet deVine)

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (05-26-2002 02:17 AM).]

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Severn
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1 posted 2002-05-26 01:01 AM


ROTF!

Walty - way cool to see you in here..and Sharon deserves it too...although I can't much see her giddying up...lol

thanks for the smile

K

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2 posted 2002-05-26 01:11 AM


Very cute Walt…but I’ll be blaming you if I have that damn song in my head all night now!! Lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2002-05-26 01:44 AM


Um...Walt? LOL!!! I love the song 409...but I'm not so sure I'd be actually SINGING giddyup!! LOL Thank you for the BIG smile!!!
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2002-05-26 01:45 AM


ok i am going to change it by popular demand
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5 posted 2002-05-26 01:50 AM


egads walt!!! I will be singing the new lyrics...and yanno? most folks ALREADY think me weird...

this is wunnerful, classic way out! grinning...love ya for this!!!


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6 posted 2002-05-26 02:07 AM


NO!!! You changed it??? Please put it back..Giddyup was so YOU!!
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2002-05-26 02:09 AM


heheh ok but this will be the lost "edited" version
Christopher
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8 posted 2002-05-26 02:39 AM


rofl - lovin this, giddyup and all (*I* can see sharon doing it... singing it... damn, there i go again...)

cool walt

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9 posted 2002-05-26 03:42 AM


BRAVO!!! Walt
Excellent, loved it

~HUGS~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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10 posted 2002-05-26 04:41 AM


Heh heh oh yeah I love it Walt!
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11 posted 2002-05-26 07:39 AM



Tanfastic!  Only you, Walt, Only You!

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12 posted 2002-05-26 09:51 AM


Love this Walt. How special and cute.
Sandra

Martie
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13 posted 2002-05-26 10:52 AM


Walt

Loving this!

Nan
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14 posted 2002-05-26 10:56 AM


Well this is a horse of a different GiddyUp...

Go, Sharon, Go

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