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Some Stars
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Some Stars |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Some stars shine brighter Because they are closer To Heaven than we know God's light ignites them And gives them the power To be seen. Some stars glow softer Because they are further Away from the fire Of worldly desire And they are destined to be unseen. All stars have purpose Whether seen or unseen It all is a matter Of knowing your place And accepting it all In good faith. Love, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bonnie, what beautiful and truthful words you have penned here today! Oh how I love this....  Thank you for this tender keeper! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Shakira New Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 9 |
I like this! I really appreciate stars, they are very beautiful and decorate the night sky perfectly. Enjoyed your poem  Shakira |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a lovely way to look at it! I like the metaphor here, I like the stars, I like the poem. Nan |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Thank you all for your kind replies! I was contemplating about the different roles in life, the big and the small and this came of it. ;o) Love, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bonnie darling girl, what a delight it is to read your writing. I love the way this shows the importance of the big and the small this is fabulous writing I’m eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bonnie, what you came of it turned out just fine...enjoyed the read...thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, we are all stars in His tapestry of creation and we all have a place of destiny among all the universe! (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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