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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
[This message has been edited by mirror man (05-23-2002 01:44 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
MM, excellent...I always enjoy the way you break the thoughts with lines like these...thank you for the morning read... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another good one...inventive...um, yet another name drop - but have you read Donne? You might appreciate his ideas (or not) if you haven't already... thanks for the evening read   K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well MM I really don't think you could help yourself under the right circumstances!! Then you'd be loving... hard bad glad sad mad like you'd been had...and of course you had been had and that's not always bad and might make you glad...........but probably couldn't pull yourself back and bring your heart back with it! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
mirror man Perhaps a word used too much, when it is meant for something rare. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I agree...it is a word that I am trying to remove from my heart...well said... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
actually liked this. agree or not, there are may times love is indeed transitive (which was a striking part) Christopher |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Sunshine -- thank you. Those aren't line breaks, they're the way I think. Severn -- yes, I've read Donne. Enjoyed it, mostly, except when I must decipher it. ethome -- no, it's not always...all that. Martie -- yes; over use. But that must be in poetry. Startime -- well, I never said there was anything wrong with real love. Maybe someone will invent a love detector. Read 1984; they used rats. (that's a joke, ha, ha) Christopher -- thank you. Love is an action and a transitive verb for all us word nerds and stuff. Thank you all very much. [This message has been edited by mirror man (05-24-2002 02:35 AM).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOL to deciphering Donne..I did an essay on him once, in which I 'proved' he was not in fact a mysogynist...hard going... Just had to revisit this one... K |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Wow! This is so very powerfully said, sweet friend, you always express emotions so wonderfully and uniquely with your words! (sigh) I think sometimes we can relate to this aspect of life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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