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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-23 04:46 PM

Listen dear heart and you will know
true words of this poet in flow
Be still my love and you shall see
the vision of once meant to be.

Take in your mind a lover’s kiss
lingering, longing, touching of this
Keep in your heart a tune of song
Listen dear heart, listen once long

Feel the warm of snow in melt
Feel the yearning of feelings felt
Let the waters flow ever so pure
Listen dear heart, let love endure

As songs will sing the tune of day
and melodies ring within this say
One heart shall beat to be once more
Listen dear heart, cast us ashore

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-23-2002 05:09 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-23 04:51 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is powerfully said, sweet friend, may your lose always have all ears and listen to your hearts desires! (sigh) I believe to listen attentively to the heart is one of the most powerful parts of faithful love, sweet friend, may you and your love forever hear what each other has to say, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-05-23 04:57 PM

Listen dear heart ....ah yes, well written....the heart can be such a friend but also a treacherous foe....but this is lovely work!

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

3 posted 2002-05-23 05:06 PM

Magnus Hi there, this is lovely, your rhyme and flow in this cannot be bettered. This is wonderful a pleasure to read

Mum isn’t very well today, but I know if she were she would be replying to this beauty, you know both mum and I adore your writing, and I think Emma has also picked up the fact you are a terrific writer

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-05-23 05:56 PM

Another awesome poet that I've missed during my absense. Beautifully written

I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-05-23 05:57 PM

Yes....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-05-23 06:08 PM

Wonderful writing Magnus...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-23 08:00 PM

*Sigh!*

~Did you just catch the scent of White Shoulders?~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2002-05-23 09:54 PM

Magnus...Tremendously beautiful, achingly romantic, poem. This is just such wonderful writing!!!!!!! ***Ivy Rose

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2002-05-23 10:02 PM

I like this.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-05-23 10:22 PM

Barry~

I bow gracefully to the King of romance......lovely heart shinning here.....")
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-05-24 12:45 PM

Hello Barry

I love 'listening' to your words of love and romance, so very soothing and beautiful are your words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

12 posted 2002-05-24 12:52 PM

wonderful write!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2002-05-24 09:58 PM

Magnus darling boy, this has got to be one of your best. You are inarguably one of the best writers on this site. You use your pen like a master craftsman, the precision of each word, the flow of meter and rhyme cannot be bettered.

Your words always manage to drench me with wonder today they have carried me into that place of heart, where tears are simply echoes and love always flows in a stream of divinity. You manage to release the light so it covers me with it’s healing aura of giving.

This is utterly utterly wonderful I love it utterly. Thank you darling boy

Since I didn’t get the chance to reply to this yesterday I’m doing it today. It’s wonderful. And thank you for your little cheer up rhyme it was so very sweet of you, thank you muchly. Big smiles and a fluttering of eyelashes from us all. In which case since Emma has eyelashes that are so long that she has to tip her head back to open her eyes, and Krissy’s are so thick if she wears mascara she needs a forklift to open hers. You’ll probably have a hurricane warning, I have normal eyelashes, so it’s not my fault

Love and light

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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