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Shakira
New Member

since 2002-05-12

Posts 9

0 posted 2002-05-24 04:09 PM

I'm still completely in love with you
Even more so now then ever
But the water's no longer blue
For the two of us to swim together

Time to set sail to different seas
Explore what we haven't before
Can we be friends, please?
I don't want to be ignored

I don't know what's in store
My heart's tired of being sore
I'm not big on surprises
Or people who put on disguises

Wish me happiness if you will
And that is what I'll wish for you
I'm completely in love with you still
Maybe that's part of being a fool

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-24 04:13 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kisses) I too know this feeling so so much, but I love you so much and as foolish as it may feel sometimes, I know love is always meant to feel this enchanting! (kisses) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love you more everyday, you will always be the Shakira of my heart!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-24-2002 04:14 PM).]

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

2 posted 2002-05-24 04:13 PM

It is never foolish to recognize and have feelings for another. The fool is the one who takes it for granted. This is a fine and heartfelt poem! Bravo!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-05-24 04:18 PM

Shakira, how beautiful and honest this piece is!
You truly speak from your heart here.
Much enjoyed today.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-05-24 08:37 PM

Joanna:

Nice, nice. Well done.

*hugs*

Sincerely,
Titus

Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-05-24 08:48 PM

Wouldn't it be great if people could part as friends instead of enemies? Sadly, people use anger as justification instead of just realizing that some people swim in different waters.

You say it very well...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-05-24 09:56 PM

I don't think it can be said much better
than this poem and Balladeer's comment.

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