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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-05-24 01:28 AM

The moon found my poetry
Scattered, tattered
Lost at sea
The moon shone secrets
Upon the heart of me
And then those questions
Came back in the rise and fall
Wondering why
Why you ever
Ever left at all
Still there were no answers
Only tears, still
(Or once again)
To spill
Exposed…….
And too open
The emotions screamed
In wave after wave
While I stood
Pretending
Wishing
I were brave
The moon glistened
Seemed to listen
Hearing my soul cry,
I’ll never find the words
To tell you good bye

~SEA~

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2002-05-24 02:04 AM

well - even though it rhymes

i still like it. missed ya 'round here.

Hugs,

C

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-05-24 02:06 AM

thanks Kissy face

wish I had more time here...hopefully I will again soon....

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2002-05-24 03:18 AM

Hi SEA~
Good to see your writings upon the screen, thanks so much for sharing this poem...AWESOME!!! well penned
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-05-24 06:47 AM

SEA...you think you're going to do all right inland? There may be more missing going on than you will be able to shake a tree at, you know?

I have missed my girls...tell the littlest poet good morning...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-24 08:09 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Susan, this is soooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I've missed you so so much and am so happy to see your poems here again! (kiss on cheek) May your heart rise again and reflect the moonlight with loves full moon beauty, sweet friend, this is spellbinding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-05-24 09:20 AM

Sea, this is just beautiful. I haven't seen you in awhile. Glad to see you again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-24 09:35 AM

This is rather sad, yet beautiful Sea,
So nice to see you back here...
you were missed.
~Morning Hugs~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-05-24 11:36 AM

Sad but beautiful write Sea!
Those feelings hang around forever it seems.......the heart is so wonderful but yet so unexplainable. You've captured the emotions in this so well, artfully done!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-05-24 11:39 AM

Sadly beautiful...filled with such deep emotions...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-05-24 11:41 AM

SEA~

'The moon found my poetry
Scattered, tattered
Lost at sea
The moon shone secrets
Upon the heart of me'

I LOVE THIS !!!!
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-05-24 12:26 PM

Mmm, I love yr soul balms.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2002-05-24 05:59 PM

susan...
such a beautiful write but yours always
are!!...and some goodbyes just aren't meant
to be...so good to see you...just keep
on writing it out hon...it does help, or
so i've found. take care.
love ya.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2002-05-24 06:03 PM

I’ll never find the words
To tell you good bye

Funny, I was just saying that myself.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-05-24 06:06 PM

Saying goodbye...NO WAY Jose!

I agree with Duncan....

Beautiful poem, Sue....sad, but so well
expressed...

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