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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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love in my letter's strewn across the page haphazardly cursive swirls at the end connecting the dots........ sealed in an envelope airborne overnight underlyng in the past and present tense chronologically in order randomly alphabetized a footnote at the bottom of the page so that I'll never forget there's no place in my words or a verse that defines you no hidden messages or a title of my own there are no capitals or periods ending my sentences no breaks between lines or personalized stationary slanted in gold..... [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-18-2002 03:21 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A different sort of tone for you. Messaged out in a classy anger...written well. Peaceful wishes. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Your writing style just grabs me, enjoyed. |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
This flows in an interesting way... I like it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is such wonderful free verse! I like your style lady. Well done.  Like a red brick, |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
these words Lori~ are slanted in gold....lovely...always from you...hugsss Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Yes, yes, I too love this, sweet friend, I too could feel frustration in these words but also a strong willful heart speaking out justice! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, your words are always pure gold to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
a footnote at the bottom of the page so that I'll never forget there's no place in my words or a verse that defines you Wow, Lori...this is excellence slanted in gold. ~gold hugsLyra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lori, splendid writing from your pen my friend...your words are amazing and you never cease to amaze me with your endless talent...beautiful write! amy "you can't stop |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ 'a footnote at the bottom of the page so that I'll never forget' Lovely thoughts ... just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
like that line - slanted in gold. catchy! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
there are no capitals or periods ending my sentences no breaks between lines or personalized stationary slanted in gold..... Loved this, Blues. It can be understood in so many ways. Very cool. but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lori, what a wonderful write this is! Very nice read aloud as well, which is something I really like in a poem. Enjoyed so much! ~hugs~ *Love the new pic as well!* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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