In Sincere Remorse (for Beth)

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Open Poetry #20

In Sincere Remorse (for Beth)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-05-23 09:26 PM

In Sincere Remorse
(for Beth)

Often times I have tried to figure
out what was wrong with me and you.
Disappointments have clouded my memory
of failed experiences we lived through.
For a long time I thought we failed
by your actions as much as mine.
But now that a decade has passed me by
thought and reason have cleared up my mind.
So in sincere remorse I offer
this apology to you.
For now I know that you
simply wanted to love me
and it was I that
wouldn't allow
you to.

JamesLee
May23
2002
I'mSorryBeth

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-05-23 09:30 PM

A very sincere apology James allows us to move on with our lives...
especially after a decade...
lightens the heart as well.
Very nicely done.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2002-05-23 09:30 PM

Wow, that was powerful.....a reminder to let people love you, probably something we all should remember at one time or another. Well done, James. I liked it.

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-23 11:27 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, this is such a heartfelt apology, sweet friend, I know deep down it weill always be accepted and you have grown stronger than ever in love just as you always are so forgivable! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-05-24 03:45 AM

Thank you Enchantress, sky and Noah for the nice responses...
Sometimes it takes a long time to get new understanding of past failures...James

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