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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-05-22 02:30 AM



I see your name

for a moment
my heart still thinks
that you are mine

and rests

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
MIdsummerRain
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1 posted 2002-05-22 03:11 AM


What essence...Let the ink flow

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-05-22 07:29 AM


I need to talk to Kit ....
there is no icon for a moth crying..........

How long can a girl be haunted by you ...
Soon I'll grow up and I wont even flinch at your name.

Alanis Morissette

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-05-22 07:31 AM


I know that feeling....well written!
Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2002-05-22 08:55 AM


duncan...

oh sweetie...my words fail me here.
soft hugs to you.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-05-22 09:20 PM


Oh yes, I know exactly what you mean.
So sad, though.
Sandra

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
6 posted 2002-05-22 09:33 PM


yep - pretty much like that.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-05-22 09:40 PM


Even when
I close my eyes
the light that was
   you
      burns
against my lids.


Chin up Dunc...
Loved this...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
8 posted 2002-05-22 10:14 PM


Funny how that happens huh?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
9 posted 2002-05-22 10:59 PM


I can relate...like on a tense wire and then your eye catches something and you forget you are even concentrating and you just let go. love is confusing, for sure.
CowgirlFreedom17
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since 2002-05-20
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Mississippi
10 posted 2002-05-23 02:15 AM


I can relate...so little words with such a story behind them...it leads into many mysterious memories and thoughts.  Good job.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

Mysteria
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11 posted 2002-05-23 03:06 AM



msflame
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12 posted 2002-05-23 07:43 AM


so much in so few words.

Glenda

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
13 posted 2002-05-23 08:20 AM


NO one puts so much into so few words as you........I have known that all along.


love to you...

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

SEA
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with you
14 posted 2002-05-24 01:12 AM


Cowboy,
I'm feelin this one
.....have missed reading you

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
15 posted 2002-05-24 01:14 AM


Susanofer! Welcome back!

(sorry Duncan... just happened to see her in your post... lol)

SEA
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with you
16 posted 2002-05-24 01:17 AM


(Kissy face! )

Duncan
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17 posted 2002-05-24 01:22 AM


No problem, C.  Nice to see ya SEA!
Oh cool!  Does this mean I get to watch?
Use my thread...please.  I'm in terrible need of diversion.

[This message has been edited by Duncan (05-24-2002 01:27 AM).]

Christopher
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18 posted 2002-05-24 03:45 AM


ok - i'm gonna get bashed for this one, but...

we'll C-Sea you Duncan.

ouch, i hurt myself...

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